Elements / Adjectives:
Lyrics - pensive, expectant, tenacious
Instruments - mellow, temperate
Emotion - uplifting, extolling, tender
Speed - deliberate
Vocals - husky, powerful, dreamy, breathless
Inferences:
Euphoric
Laudatory
Solemn
Ardent
Earnest
Claim:
In the song "Your Love Is A Song" by the band Switchfoot, the pensive, tenacious air of the lyrics, along with the mellow drum and guitar accompaniment and the powerful, husky, and dreamlike quality of the singer's vocals combine to evoke an overwhelming sense of breathlessness and euphoria surrounding the song's subject, a love so solemn and earnest it becomes the singer's reason for living.
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ReplyDeleteI really liked the expression in the second half of the sentence. "...[A]n overwhelming sense of breathlessness and euphoria" was particularly striking.
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